Equine Vampiris- Chapter 4She increased the pressure on the flesh, her face getting drenched with the delectable life force of her still breathing meal. She could feel the prey pounding on her flank with her hooves, struggling against her animal strength. She pulled away, its head hitting the floor with a soft thud. Twilight started to lick her hooves clean as the prey began to bleed out onto the lino floor. Her ears could still hear the faint sounds of breathing as it faded.
Vision: She is, as they say, right in it now that Pony Van Helsing is aware of her condition. Given that his prescription is twenty ccs of stake through the heart, I should think that Luna offers Twi her best shot of surviving this crazy toboggan ride.
Originality: While we're obviously looking at a person undergoing vampirism told from the vampire's side, there's enough of a connection to the series to make it novel.
Technique: The conversation she and Spike had as they planned their escape reminds us that being a monster isn't as black and white as Neuron would have us believe.
Impact: I wonder what it is that Luna is about to do. Odds are that we're looking at getting herself a special student.